What went well:
- Good lighting, makes shots clear.
- Interesting storyline.
- Good use of props, makes things more interesting.
- Nice variety of shots.
- Excellent mise-en-scene.
- Good extreme close ups.
- Good location.
- On the whole smooth editing.
- They liked the 'cheesy 80s' theme.
Criticisms:
- A couple of shots were slightly out focused, but not to the degree that they are unusable.
- Could make the editing more snappy to add more suspense.
- Some scenes could be shortened.
- Needs music or audio.
Overall, I was pleased with the feedback and very thankful for their kind comments. There were no criticisms made that I thought unfair or that my group hadn't already noticed, therefore there were no shocking surprises. The feedback has helped us continue editing as it helped us decide what to keep, what to cut and what to adapt slightly. Getting an outsider's opinion with fresh eyes helps us consider a couple of things that we may not had noticed before.
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